Final Blogging Assessment

Maddie Dimerling
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Summary:
Hey guess what time it is! It's blog time! So far in this book Turtle Tail an old friend of the group of cats has come back from the soft life of a kittypet and into the wildlife style again. Grey Wing has realized that he missed her so much and how much she means to him. She fills the gap in his heart! Jagged Peak, Grey Wing's little brother, hasn't been able to do anything since he broke his leg in the first book. Right now Jagged Peak is always turned away and wants to help everyone.

Jagged Peak:
Jagged Peak isn't really the main character but is still the main characters brother. Jagged Peak is always turned down and wants to help but he can't from his broken leg. He was turned down from his other brother, Clear Sky, and went to live with Grey Wing. The brothers fight each other and it creates a wall between the forest and the moor. Jagged Peak is unable to do anything but I think he will be able to overcome his broken leg and be able to do something amazing.


http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/Thunder_Rising
I have read this website and believe that this has a really good summary even though it is wikipedia. I will have to agree with the a good summary.


****************Sorry again for my obsession on Warriors********************************

•  I think this blog post shows great voice because in the beginning it says,"Hey guess what time it is! It's blog time!" I think this is a great quote to show my voice because you don't see many people being excited for a blog post but it was time for a blog post."*Sorry again for my obsession on Warriors!*" I think this also shows my voice because my obsession is warriors and cats and not many people would say sorry for blogging too much on Warriors! Also I have a lot of ! because I'm happy and many people just pu8ts periods and that's kind of boring.

• Many of my sentences are small and large which creates syntax to show the length of my sentences and give it more emphasis. Some sentences are,"She fills the gap in his heart!" This is very short because it shows a pause that they might both love each other. Diction in this paragraph is,"Hey guess what time it is! It's blog time!" I chose this informal/low diction because it has a casual voice and it's not really formal and it's like a normal conversation.