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What? Detective Cooper going to the library, WHAT????? Detective Cooper is going to the library to find out some info on the Creators plantation/house. He trying to crash the Creators party he's having soon. The Creator is a little kid who invented Pop Travel that's why he's the Creator. He lives in Beasley Hills a well known place where many rich people as you may say live. Kind of like Beverly Hills.
Back in his hometown where his brother and his assistant are getting an unknown guy coming in. He says that his brother Phisner, Coopers client, has diappeared and wanted to solve the case. Miki, Cooper's assitant, approached this man and wanted to help. In the end it happened to not be Phisner's brother and a FBI agent trying to get them out of the way and safe.
I love how you can hear your voice in your writing! It makes your blog posts more interesting to read!
ReplyDeleteAmazing way to open up the blog. I was immediately drawn in. I wouldn't exactly say this would be a great book for me but I really like how you described it. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteLove how you can clearly see the voice in your post here. It really stands out, and keeps the reader engaged. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI love your introduction to the post! It catches attention and makes the post more exciting
ReplyDeleteVery well done post. Your post conveys your emotion giving you an idea of how you felt when you read this part of your book. You also were able to give details on those scenes that you read but you were still able to convey some mystery onto what really made those scenes the way they are (in other words to the puzzle pieces). I also loved how you made the connection between the city the book is set in and how it compares to in relation to the modern world Beverly Hills.
ReplyDeleteNice use of voice!
ReplyDeleteHey grl how you doin. I like how you use a lot of voice in every single one of your posts.
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